FLASH5: RESOLUTION. DAY 3.

 
I have followed this competition with all sense of commitment and I can tell you that you wouldn't regret checking this out... The piece features on facebook and from time to time you will find it on here...
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*Lights come on as Soogun saunters in to applause, namechants and the sound of 50 Cent's 'I Will Still Kill.'
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'Here Comes The Boom' blares from the speakers and in comes Hymar in his 'Team Takedown' Tee and cant-wait-to-get-it-started walk. The crowd pops*

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Announcer's Voice: Welcome to day three of Flash5. Thanks for following. Before we start, let us get go to yesterday's results.
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Soogun wrote SACRIFICE and nailed 153 audience votes and 2 judge votes to score 65 votes. Hymar Did BEING STRONG FOR MAMA and scored 71 audience votes and no judge vote( 3rd judge didn't vote) to score 21 points. Soogun wins Day 2 to bring scores at 1-1. The war has officially started. I predict today will be the toughest and most even matchup ever! In Jesus name. Amen.
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Today's Flash has a 50 word limit. Whoever chose that is an evil bascard. Haba, anyway, it will be interesting to see how both Hymar and Soogun turn it to their advantage. Soogun however has a history of being Baba with shorter word limits. As usual, I will state the theme after both stories.
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The RULES ARE:
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1. Read both stories and say what you think of them. Criticisms? Critiques? Famzings? Badbelleisms?.
2. Vote your favourite of the two(eg I VOTE story 1)
3. Edited comments to change votes are considered void.
4. Do NOT mention who you think wrote which. Such comments will be deleted. Mentioning names will foster biased voting.
5. Do NOT copy and paste the stories and absolutely DO NOT BLOG them without permission. Beware the Block button
6.Soogun and Hymar are only allowed to comment to tag their friends. Or to share laughs.
7. Tag your buddies, do not whine about tags. Tag yourself.
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Voting ends on Wednesday by 8:30 AM.
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Let The Madness Begin. Amen.
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THE BOY WHO DIED WHILE IN COMA.
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Days after the funeral, his dog, who never left his graveside, ran mad.
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Howling and scratching at the grave, they had to shoot him. Out of respect, they dug the boy's grave, to bury dog beside boy.
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The coffin had scratch marks , his nails were bloody. They'd buried him alive.
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CLAIRVOYANCE.
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Tonight, right before your wife goes into labour, the coffin seller down the road will knock on your door and say, grinning...
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"Sir, I've built the best coffins for her and the baby, just in case they don't make it."
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And at that very moment, the labour pains will grip her.
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Theme: A story with a coffin in it.